Thursday, August 12, 2010

Poetic Justice to "Chaos and effect"

(By Chavi Jain)

Amidst the obscure, hidden in confusion,
Lies an effort to achieve a mission..
Our mission, for others trivial may seem,
But its our vision, our life, our dream..
for that - there are tries and retries,
there are many pains but no one cries..
The strength matures to a drive to succeed,
While travelling on your own with no one to plead..
The harder you try, the closer you get,
Though goals remain far from being met..
For all your effort , there is a time,
You finally get your priority prime..
The roads that are blocked, the path unidentified..
amidst the crossroad yet mystified..
When there is no halt and efforts still prevail,
Confused and Obscure you still wish to sail..
Sailing in the journey, a new place you reach,
a different lesson every experience will teach..
That discovery can now be a new mission,
Opening a door for a brighter vision..
Yes, it’s a path whose destination none can detect,
A journey that is called “CHAOS TO EFFECT”...

10 comments:

  1. Awesome Creation....
    Well Done Chavi!!!

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  2. This is the new diamond came out
    from the poetic mine of Chavi Jain- harsh

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  3. Excellent creation... Well done chavi... love to read ur poems...u rock....:)

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  4. heyyy di awesm poetry!!!!!! hamesha ki tarah sabse achi , sabse pyaari
    ur lik a shining star tat spreads d brightness everywhere
    proud to b ur sis>>>>>>>>
    cheers

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  5. AWSOME WORK YAAR
    MIND BLOWING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ITS SOMETHING STRAIGHT FROM A VERY SWEET AND PURE HEART
    HATS OFF FOR YOU CHAVIIIIIIIIIII

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  6. hey it was awesome....amazing jus like all ur creations....loved it angel

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  7. hey chavlu, u hav done very fabuuuulus wrk on this poem,,amazing yar..........each n every word of poem is mindblowing,i really proud on u....keep rocking n create nice poem like this..........

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  8. You've amazed me. It needs maturity and Imagination to say simple things with such nicety and sophistication. I'm proud of you. Keep it coming.

    God bless.

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  9. marvelous,amazing...the reality of path to try hard till succeed has been depicted beautifully with ur creative mind n ingenuity..these words will give further strength for pursuing the right goal..this is a land mark poetry..keep it up..god bless u..best wishes!!!!!!!

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  10. awesome....again a very nice poem from the great poet chavi....

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